Criticize helpfully,
Others can improve.
Make sure your 
Meaning and intent is nice.
Even though you're
Nice,
Try to help them improve.

Like our flag,
It symbolizes freedom.
Because that is the American way.
Everyone should have liberty,
Right down
To
Your worst enemy.

Still.
Takes time to make.
Art.
Takes time to create.
Uses imagination,
Emphasizes ideas.

Present
Art on a canvas.
In galleries, or hung up on the fridge.
No one can't do it.
Try to express your
Internal emotions.
No painting can be bad,
Got to try.

Art
Based on no rules.
Silent
Thinking outside of the box.
Right is non-existent.
A great way to
Create beautiful
Things.
 


11/09/2012 10:42am

I really like the acrostics that you wrote! But remember to publish your blog that you wrote today, because I didn't see it. Bye!

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Maritsa
11/09/2012 10:50am

Nice job JJ.

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Julisa Mijangos
11/16/2012 10:53am

Well JJ this poem that you wrote was very amazing. You know how to express yourself when writing it. However. I think that maybe if your lines can be a bit more longer.

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